Simple effective dialogue and great change of mood. Creepy… but great
Thanks! I’m very happy with the way this scene came out overall.
Simple dialogue seems to be what works best for me. I usually write the first phrases that come to mind. When I edit the script, I’m either trying to make things sound more natural, clarify an idea, or cut redundant words out so they’ll take up less space. If I try to spend more time on the dialogue than that, I just get stuck second-guessing myself.